Bodine

media type="custom" key="6270147" Here is my short story for term 1.

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At Kikora we found a motel Quin and mum went to a gallery and me and dad went to hunting and fishing we had fish and chips for tea. that morning we stopped at Wirau it would be a great school for me next we stoped at oxford then the rikaia gorge then stayed at Geraldine and then that morning we stopped at Twizel lots of heads next we stopped at Cromwell for the night that morning we went to uncle Duwyane I was working most of the time or hunting we went on a jet boat quin caught a trout in diamond lake when we left we stopped at Haast and had lunch at hard antler every where we looked there was antlers it was my faverote pub the next stop toke us to shanty town we went on a steam train and got dropped of at the saw mill then we dug for gold then i got locked up and betin on one of those bords with people on them we went into a pub when we left we stayed at Greymouth next we had breakfast.

week 5 writing focus: Adding the 5 senses I got a week off work and went hunting I Roared up the deer .then out of nowhere I saw a Stag about 14pt charging out of the bush at me he was ROARING his lungs out as if he was fighting me you could gust feel the anger in him then from behind me came another stag about 12pt ROARING his lungs out the to stags each side of me started fighting

week 6 writing focus: adding verbs (action words) Me and Ross were riding his motor bikes when some how in some way he was a skeleton with flames coming out of his head I got such a fright I didn’t see a brunch I was close lined turns out it was a hulushanashon ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha